Monday, September 9, 2013

Learning through Teaching

The goal here is to sound natural.
That... that's it?
Yep. It doesn't matter what's being said, as long as it flows like a real conversation.
Seems kind of unimportant.
Not at all. For that sense of realism, it's far more important than any amount of accuracy in physics or protocol.
Surely not!
Oh, yes! The audience is people; that is what they know, what they are most familiar with. Some people may know the science behind something, and will go "it doesn't work like that!" when they see the impossible. Some people are familiar with organizations, and will go "you could never get away with that!" when they see a Lieutenant getting orders from a Major. But many will not.
And speech?
Everyone knows what people talk like. For instance, no one says "unimportant" in casual conversation. They'd say it "doesn't matter"
Oh, come on!
I know, it's terrible. We have all these words for things, very precise words, but unless it's a formal speech or written down, people use the same, small common words for everything. Anyway. The audience can accept anything, if the people are still acting like people. It's only when they go "No one would ever talk like THAT!" that you've failed, since everyone knows what people should sound like.
So how's this going so far?
Well, it could be better. Real people interrupt each other, pause in the middle of thoughts, say um and er and that. Honestly, real conversation is like a poorly made engine. Stops, starts, revving up and hiccuping all the time. People's minds are rarely organized enough for smooth dialogue.

Monday, February 7, 2011

GRAURGH!

Fuck!
Fuck fuck fuck!
Shit!
Down! Down! Get down!
Pant pant... is it... pant... still out there..?
I... gasp... dunno... lemme- shit!
AUGH!
Yes, yes, it's still there.
Oh, christ. I mean, jesus FUCK.
Preaching to the goddamned choir, man.
I mean... what? What do we do? What CAN we do?
We... we gotta think, we gotta-
There's no TIME, it's right THERE, and it's-
SHH!
!!!
Is it... isitcomingthisway?
... I... Ican'tlook.
Oh god. Oh god.
Shit. Shiiiiiiiit.
...
...
Maybe if we just-
Shh!

Wednesday, January 26, 2011

Anti Disestablishment

He was a mad one, alright, but he was determined to show them, show them all. It was after the end, after the fall, the collapse, after the riots had stopped and the new non-order was created. The anarchists were not in charge, but they had had their way, and all the rulers and leaders and tyrants and mayors and principals had been deposed or disposed, and no one was in charge. There was no system, no The MAN, no authority that demanded bowing and kowtowing to... so what was there? What was there that he could POSSIBLY rebel against? For he was of that age, that mind, that type that needed to fight against, to be an outsider, to be a non-conformist... but how to be a non-conformist when everyone is a unique instance unto themselves?

The first step was to recreate a society with leaders...

Monday, January 24, 2011

We've Rested Long Enough

Do we have to?
Yes.
But I'm so tired...
I know.
But-
We still have to.
Augh.
I'm sorry.
It's just so HARD...
I know.
I can barely stand!
I know.
I just... I just wanna stay here. I don't wanna go.
I know. But we have to.
Pleeease?
No. I'm sorry.
Why? Why are you making me do this?
You know why.
It's... I... just... hugh ugh ugh...
Shh. Shh shh shh.
A hugh oough ooh...
I know. I know.
Please...
I'm sorry.

Monday, October 11, 2010

Things are very tense

... oops.
Oops? OOPS?!
Nothing! It's nothing!
No, you said oops! You. Said. OOPS. What did you do?
Nothing! Shut up! Look, it's fine, okay!
What did you DO? What happened?!
NOTHING, okay?! What- don't come over here!
What did you do? What went wrong? Where is it?
Nothing, nothing, nothing! Alright? Nothing! It's fine! Everything's fine!
No, it is not all fine. If it was all fine, you wouldn't have said oops!
Well, I didn't, okay? I don't know what you heard! I didn't say oops, nothing is wrong, everything is FINE!
I swear to god, if you did something, and everything goes wrong...
NOTHING will go wrong, okay? OKAY?!
I don't believe you, but I have to get back to my station.
Whatever! Just go already.
I swear, you're going to kill us all someday...
Look, shut up! Just... shut up, okay? Shut. Up.

Wednesday, October 6, 2010

Colder than an unfired bullet

It was a cold game, this game of sniping. Nothing but crawling around, guessing where the other is at, hoping to remain unseen yourself, and taking a single shot before scurrying away hastily. Sometimes you would throw a rock and try to get the other to reveal their position by drawing their fire there, and tracking their fire back. Sometimes, you have no doubt, they would do the same. Round and round you sneak, hoping sometimes to surprise them from the side, from behind, from anywhere at all, only to catch them unawares and unshielded. Other times, you can barely stand it, and fire off a shot at every noise, real or imagined. You would be hungry, if your stomach could unknot itself at all. Your whole body is taut as a guitar string, and aches for it. All this, and yet you dare not rest, for death would surely come upon you the moment you closed your eyes.

Monday, October 4, 2010

It would seem, at first blush

Oh, come on, stop being such a weenie about this.
But I look ridiculous!
Oh for... no you don't.
I do too.
Okay, well, yeah, you do. But it's an adorable ridiculousness.
...
Now, see, when you blush like that, it's just even more adorable.
You're not making this any easier, you know.
I can't help it if you're being all cute now! If anything, that just makes me want to get you out and show you off all the more!
Nooo!
Yes, and stop arguing. You'll be fine.
Arrgh... alright. Let me finish getting my shoes on.
That's the spirit!